Thursday, May 27, 2010

Mama's Got Rhythm

This past Saturday, "Jack's Mama" told her far-flung, homespun highland tales at the Ohio River Valley Folk Festival in Madison, Indiana. (Jack's Mama is my pioneer mountain woman character through whom I tell stories from southern Appalachian oral tradition.)

At the conclusion of one set, two young men, probably in their early 20s, told me how much they enjoyed the show. "I love to listen to you tell," one said. "There is a rhythm, a cadence, to your speech. I love your pacing."

No one has ever said that before, but I really like it. The rhythm comes naturally to me, I suppose, but I do consciously pace the story. As a raconteur, I am very interactive with my audiences, working to draw each one into the tale. Pacing, working in tandem with the rhythm, is an important tool toward that end.

After the men left, I sat enjoying the balmy breeze coming off the river, and I thought about how storytelling compares with writing.  Rhythm and pacing are essential to our writing, as well. If a sentence is grammatically and mechanically flawless but is choppy or awkward, it may give the reader pause. Of course, there may be times when we want to slow the reader down.

The storyteller knows when to speak slowly and deliberately for dramatic effect. The writer can accomplish the same thing by making each sentence a separate paragraph, for example. Or she may incorporate alliteration, a well-placed dash, or longer, more complex sentences.

At the high point of the action or scene, the storyteller's sentences may become very short, little more than a series of phrases or clauses. The writer does the same thing. Whether spoken or written, such techniques achieve the same results.

Many have told me that I use dramatic pause well. I can tolerate silence. And nothing grabs an audience's attention more quickly. Whether I speak softly or crescendo just before the pause, I have the full attention of each one when I fall silent and just look around at them, eyeball to eyeball.

Compare that effect to the writer's hook lines, particularly at chapters' ends. (Did those last two words slow you down a bit?) Christian writer Ramona K. Cecil presented a wonderful workshop in which she said we should not try to write a good hook at the end of a chapter, but, rather, we should end the chapter at a good hook. That statement helped me tremendously as a writer. Those hooks are the dramatic pauses of writing. Why dramatic? Because the listener/reader can hardly wait for the pause to end so that the story can move on. In the case of the reader, she wants to get that page turned as quickly as possible.

What a compliment that young man gave. Mama's got rhythm. Do you? Dear fellow writers, I hope you'll leave a comment telling about how you consciously incorporate rhythm and pacing in your writing. Examples are welcome.

Write on!

8 comments:

  1. This is an area I am not sure about in my writing. I could always strengthen the chapter ending hooks, and I am hoping to learn from my brilliant critique partners about that. ;)

    I love your picture! I have got to go to one of these some day. Do you ever do these at writing conferences?

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  2. Thanks so much for your comment, Kathleen. I think your critique group will be very helpful. Two of my critique partners, on different occasions, have backed up a few sentences or even paragraphs and said, "This would be a good place to end the chapter, because the hook is stronger." I always appreciate that. I'm getting pretty good at spotting such places myself, now. Once I cut off so much of a chapter that the deleted part became its own chapter.

    Write on!
    Because of Christ,
    Sharon

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  3. I like to vary my sentence and paragraph length, not just to provide variety, but to change the impact or mood. If I'm trying to emphasize a point, I tend to use short, one-sentence paragraphs. If I want to convey harmony, I will use a longer paragraph where the sentences flow together. Not that I always succeed, but I'm getting there.

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  4. Yes, Kathryn. Varying sentence length serves several purposes. Good technique!

    Write on!
    Because of Christ,
    Sharon

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  5. Kathleen, you asked if I ever do a storytelling show at writers' conferences. No, I have not done that. It would work well, though, if I were to follow it up with a workshop session comparing the two. I'll have to think about that. I've conducted numerous workshops, but they were either on writing or storytelling. It would be great fun--and helpful to participants, I think--to combine the two.

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  6. Nicely done. I used to do Civil War re-enacting much the same as you do. I found the idea of pacing so very true. To be a good "storyteller" you really have to hone your craft just like a writer and vice versa.

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  7. Thank you, Linda. I don't think I realized you had done that. Many of the techniques definitely work for both.

    Write on!
    Because of Christ,
    Sharon

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  8. Oh, yes. What a great analogy. I think it applies to music as well. Just as it does in any art form. Hm, I need to think on this some more!

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